I have completed a full revision of Die Tonight; Rule Tomorrow. There were some minor errors with the timeline and a couple of details I changed to improve the flow of the story, but nothing major that would confuse you down the road.
Before we have a little taste of the next chapter, I want to thank all of you who read Ch 23 and especially those who took time to comment. It meant a lot to receive the feedback. The viewing stats for the story aren’t as high as I’m used to seeing them, and I can’t help but feel I’m losing the reader base and that this piece of fanfic has become irrelevant. I know I’ve taken too long to update (my bad), and I wish I had more time to dedicate to writing. Maybe, I’m just too much in my head, or maybe I’m a dragon and it’s time to wrap up for good. I don’t know. I still intend to finish DTRT. Review love keeps me going, so I appreciate it more than I can tell you.
“Last Reunion” by talented Peter Roe is part of the epic inspiration mix. Plug in those headphones and enjoy.
…I said, “Eric, I don’t want to walk on eggshells around you.”
Immediately, his eyes snapped back to me. “Either do I,” he admitted in a low voice.
“Then let’s not make this any harder than it has to be.” I wasn’t going to air our dirty laundry in front of outsiders down in NOLA. We had to present a united front, come hell or high water. “So… we’re okay, considering?”